Try this out - Matrix Unplugged (Do you dare to jack in?)

[HD_Neo]

Quidormit...well what is better ?
Tell him "oh cool bro it has the word matrix in it and i think i will try it out" ?
Or tell him what he had done wrong so that he can think about "hmm okay what would be the better way? what can i improve where ? "

Yeah it is a browser game but really - did you played some browsergames in the last Years ?
I did - i tried many browsergames out in several genres .
Some for fun, some for potential interest of publishing etc.

If he want some players , he has to change a lot of things.

It doesnt has something to do with "hating on him" - no i like his idea (the Story).
But i think it is better for him to get some critics so that he knows what he can improve and not people who say "oh cool i will try it out " and then didnt hear a word from them .